59-9 TEAM DEATH MATCH?!

I was just wondering if you could check out my first ever commentary and give me some feedback as to what i should improve on. thanks in advance:)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_TCX8lmSQV4

 

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Last updated July 3, 2018 Views 0 Applies to:
Did you miss this sticky at the very top of the forum?

Hey look, an above average score with "never before seen" commentary. Haven't seen this before :l

Looks like he didn't read the sticky

Meh. Commentaries are a dime a dozen.

I'll check it out for you and leave you a comment on your video letting you know what I think but like the above posters said you can't make these types of posts