I would really appreciate any and all criticism I can get from you guys. I'm trying to get my channel rolling and I felt like you guys would be a good source for feedback. If you want to watch my vid go ahead, or you can also just post me some tips if you feel like they would be helpful (As in what you would like to see from a new commentator).
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tzHjRf08Ns